The three boys became fast friends with Makot, I think mainly because he spent money on them, and they were poor. Makot would take them to the movies, and buy them food and treats. I think Makot spent money on them because he wanted and needed friends, and nobody wanted to associate with him because of his parental situation. In a sense, he was buying friendship. Makot's father did not work, and his mother seemed to be a disrespected lady. I do feel sorry for Makot to be living in a situation like that. No child can pick their parents lifestyle, and when the child see's how disrespected his parents are by others, and knows there's nothing he can do about it, it makes for a lonely life. I think it's one of those unfair injustices of life, where there is nothing to be done but survive as best you can. Makot seems to accept this life, but when Kiyoshi tells him he's been forbidden to be his friend because of Makots parents, Makot shows his shame in his face. It's obvious this has happened to Makot before, because his reaction is to just say goodbye and then walk away.
I don't like the way Mikot treated his mother, by being physical with her and telling her to shut up, but I also believe that children are a direct product of their upbringing. Makot was throwing his anger and the injustice of his life on his mother, and projecting the blame towards her. Makot was clearly embarrassed by his mother, and didn't want her near his friend. Kiyoshi was puzzled by Makots disrespect towards his mother, thought he would never do that to his own mom, but he also thought that his mom would never act the way Makots mom did in the first place.
I'm looking forward to the rest of the book, I really liked this first section! Does Kiyoshi continue to be Makots friend behind his parents back? Does Makot try to run away from home? And I really like the dialect the story was written in. It breaks the rules of English, and that catches and holds my attention more than anything.
Hi Carrie,
ReplyDeleteexcellent feed back on the story!! I really like how you asked the questions at the end. I too really like this story. I sure felt sorry for Makots, his life reminds me of what it must be like for the kids of drug dealer's or even gang bangers. This poor kid just wanted to be like all the other kids play have friends have people over, what a shame. I also don't care for the way he treats his mom but you are right children are a direct product of their upbringing boy I wish it were not so. I am hoping that some how Makot is taken in by one of the boys family or that his parents come to the conclusion that they are hurting there son and make a change. I know wishful thinking. Can't wait to read that rest of the book. Thanks for sharing.
Stacy
Hi Carrie,
ReplyDeleteI love your point: "I do feel sorry for Makot to be living in a situation like that. No child can pick their parents lifestyle, and when the child see's how disrespected his parents are by others, and knows there's nothing he can do about it, it makes for a lonely life. I think it's one of those unfair injustices of life, where there is nothing to be done but survive as best you can." Well stated!
I also agree with your observations of the way Makot speaks to his mother. He knows what she does and the way the entire family is talked about on the plantation, and I'm sure that's embarrassing to him. He lashes out at his mother and is disrespectful, which is certainly telling of his anger and the way he's being raised.
Interestingly, there are multiple languages in this text, which seems more realistic to me. Only rarely do people speak Standard English perfectly, let alone one dialect or language.
Thanks for your insights!
Take care,
Lauren
Hello,
ReplyDeleteI thought it was great that you brought up that you cannot choose your parents lifestyles. Like I always say "you cant pick your parents". It is so true that you have to deal with what you are dealt as regards to your parents and your upbringing. You just have to maintain in the way that you can which is what I think Makot is doing even though he is not being respectful and acting with any kind of morals.
Thanks for sharing,
Mandy Ericson
When author told Makot that he was forbidden by his parents to see him, Makot’s reaction was strange to me and he just said goodbye. After knowing Makot’s nature everyone must have thought that he will try to reason with the author to not to listen to his parents but instead he let it go. It did not surprise him at all. After all he must have known that sooner or later the kids who follow him will leave him because of his parents’ background. I really feel sorry for him in this point.
ReplyDeleteI have to agree with wanting to see what happens next with kiyoshi and Makot. Makot does seem to buy the friendship of Kiyoshi and his friends but seems forced by his parents. Makot is the outcast in his grade and can't make friends his own age because of his parents. you stated that you can't pick your parents seems to fit Makot very well and just have to survive. As for Kiyoshi it seems he has a difficult choice to make, continue to play with Makot or listen to his parents. He seems to be drawn to Makot more than his parents choice.
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